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  • Title: Girl
  • Artist: Alutaps
  • Description: A person i drew for fun with a sharpie pen :3
    im not to sure how much i like the body its less detailed and seems bigger?
    hands are sorta my killer D: so are legs so meeeh
    but the head i like alot :]
  • Date: 01/01/2009
  • Tags: girl
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Arlikie - 01/03/2009
  • I agree with Bored x1000. You need to work on a lot of stuff. This picture is basicallly a bunch of shapes thrown together with designs on them. Try making things in proportion next time, too. 3/5 for effort.
  • m i s s NiCOLiE - 01/02/2009
  • this is really good, but her torso looks a little too boxy. maybe if you smoothed it out and worked it out to look a little more like a rounded body, you wouldn't just be proud in the head. x3
  • Bored x1000 - 01/02/2009
  • Goth?
    Awesome.
    Positions for arms, legs, hands, and feet?
    Not so good.
    The skirt can use some work, as well.
    The eyes are on her forehead?
    Creepy.
    You should bring those down.
    You should work on the neck and shoulders. . .
    Keep trying.
    For an attempt, I'll give you a 3.
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