- Title: Nap time
- Artist: Atlys
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Description:
A picture of my avatar taking a nap on a windowsill
Comment please tell me what i'm doing right and please please tell me what i'm doing wrong I could really use the help here - Date: 02/09/2009
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Laybunny - 11/24/2009
- It's cute, I love it <3 4/5, might want to work on the angle a bit, like try making it seem more like a side-view
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- Yandere Neko - 02/12/2009
- no! the hair is great! the only thing I see wrong is the bench or whatever he's sitting on looks weird
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- TotaIIy Not A Mule - 02/11/2009
- my only problem is the hair, but good job
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- Atlys - 02/10/2009
- Thanks for the help Really appreciated
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- Tunes14 - 02/10/2009
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I like it. But I can give you a few tips, if you want:
If he's lying down, his hair would be a little more messy, spread out. It's like it's glued to his head. I think the lower half of his leg could use to be a little longer. And you've drawn his chest straight on, which makes him appear to be almost falling off the windowsill. Move the opening of his jacket over to his left a little more and it will give the appearance of more of a side veiw. The rest is just awesome! - Report As Spam
- tagster113 - 02/09/2009
- the hair on ur drawing looks like ur avi i thingk that is ur avi
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