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  • Why must you break my heart?
  • Title: Why must you break my heart?
  • Artist: Kikko Mangetsu
  • Description: Ok I drew this after "Cold and Shy" when I had a daydream and this is what i thought of i really hope you like it. I rarely do realistic anime (what i mean by realistic is the shading)
  • Date: 04/24/2009
  • Tags: must break heart
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • LostJavaBytes - 08/07/2011
  • more constructive criticism comes! the ear is set a bit high and her neck could be a little thinner. usually on a 3/4 angle you want the neck to start after the chin. see http://www.dragoart.com/tuts/pics/9/5976/33673/how-to-draw-an-easy-face-step-3.jpg hope that helped! :]
    comment and rate me back?
  • Nephylis - 04/27/2009
  • More could be done with the hair in my opinion, but I have nothing more against the piece. The emotion really shows well. Most people take too much time drawing to notice that side of a character.

    4/5.
  • Jacqal - 04/24/2009
  • um, i like cold and shy a lot better. i'm just pointing out stuff. her nose:eye:ears ratio is too contrasting. hair looks unnatural. tears are falling diagonally? i understand falling down the shape of her cheeks, but there's no ) sort of pattern. just a and a / . her shoulders are also too broad for her head size, which i honestly think is a little small. i'm really not trying to completely put down your drawing. i'm just putting my opinions out there.
 
 

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