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  • Title: anime/manga1
  • Artist: DarkVesper666
  • Description: Ok, technically this is my second submission, but the first one was just a test xD it turned out pretty well (got 4 stars in the end :D) so im starting over now....heres the first drawing in my art booklet xD grid paper i know -__- at anyrate i hope you enjoy it and there will be more on the way so hold tight if you like em ^-^
  • Date: 08/06/2009
  • Tags: animemanga1
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Comments (6 Comments)
  • DarkVesper666 - 08/08/2009
  • lol xD ya i kno....about the grid paper i dont use it on purpose >,< my book is just like that lol....anyway i appreciate the critism
  • jazzy_aka_spazz - 08/07/2009
  • er, i don't really like it sorry but you went overboard with all the wrinkles. and the other submisions are right, the jawbone is a little funky excuse my 70's word. and what's up with that grid paper? it's supposed to be straight lines not all squiggly squid.1/5
  • Gator-aide - 08/06/2009
  • The Jaw bone needs some work, don't make it disappear into the hair! Our jaw bones don't do it so theirs shouldn't either D: ! She needs more of a forehead and as always I adore the eyes (:
    I'd like to applaud you on the neck detail and the cloths. At first glance I didn't notice was wearing a jacket so I thought...wow thats some build..but I took a closer look.
    You've got a clever thing going on, keep it up ! <3
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