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  • Artist: Charlotte Smith-Gubler
  • Description: I dont think it's really good,can some of you give me some tips?
  • Date: 09/29/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • Kikko Mangetsu - 09/29/2009
  • well, this is just my opinion
    spread out the facial features so the forhead is smaller
    work on the nose (i know its hard i dread them too)
    make some shine marks in the hair by using more graceful strokes
    more details in the eyes like eyelashes,the line that im not sure what its called above the eye
    use cleaner coloring
    folds in clothes(the thing i dread even more then noses DX)
    other than that its a really good start
  • Kikko Mangetsu - 09/29/2009
  • and sorry if i typed to much its just that when i ask people to critique me all i get is "good" or "it sucks" and if im lucky i get a 3 word response like "it's REALLY good". i dont know if they cant read or if they are not smart enough to know what critique means but im pretty sure good is not a critique
    sorry im ranting to you but im kinda bored and so if you made it this far without getting bored or passing out from my horrible grammar and spelling you get a cookie!!!
    O <---cookie XD
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