- by xXDead-Before-It-BeganXx |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 11/07/2009 |
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- Title: Raven
- Artist: xXDead-Before-It-BeganXx
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Description:
well i was thinkn bout making this book n this is a picture of the main character Raven
~please tell me anything i could improve on - Date: 11/07/2009
- Tags: raven
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Kimmi_Kyoto - 06/26/2010
- i really like this.
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- xXDead-Before-It-BeganXx - 11/08/2009
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thnk u Kaihei ur comment was very helpful im definately going to look into those things
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- Phantom-of_Winter - 11/08/2009
- You have to be careful with your anatomy. The mouth is too close to the jaw line, exposing nothing of the rest of the chin. Also, the body looks a little squished in and the chest plates might be too long for the body itself. But this isn't bad at all; just be careful of how the body is shaped and I might suggest looking at anatomy studies for refrence. 3/5
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- xXbroken_in_piecesXx - 11/07/2009
- do mean the book vampire kisses
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- iluvTwilight_01 - 11/07/2009
- hey it looks good! 4/5!
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