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  • Title: unfinished drawing
  • Artist: darkchii39
  • Description: i need people to tell me whats wrong with my drawing ... good comments are also ok but i want to know what i should change or fix cause i want to get better at drawing
  • Date: 01/06/2010
  • Tags: unfinished drawing
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Sumeragi Clan - Hokuto - 02/08/2010
  • Maybe continue the highlights in the hair? To the right you have a bunch of lovely highlights you drew in. It just seems funny that they aren't continued on the left side, maybe draw them a little lower since they are at an angle. Just a suggestion.
  • 13th_Lone_Wolf - 02/01/2010
  • Lastly, her eyes. They are great, but adding pupils would prob. help drastically. Also, kep in mind that this is YOUR drawing. All these are only suggestions based on wat i do. Only you can decide wat u want done... ; ) 5/5
  • 13th_Lone_Wolf - 02/01/2010
  • Very good. Since you did ask,there are few changes.nuthin big because its actually good as is. Neway,leave the bust,its fine. Thats the style so it fits perfectly. Its not the head that needs re-sized,its the hair. mostly just put sumthin on the top,replacing the flat curve. maybe add a part on the top?(hard to explain,ill photoshop for you and send it with changes pointed out,with ur permission of course)The old line is actually a better hight for it.2 b con.
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