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  • Phantom-of_Winter - 03/07/2010
  • -continuing-
    Now for the art itself. Her head looks a little too big for her body and you kind of squished her face to the jawline. You should try to study the head and make sure the eyes, nose, and mouth are where they're suppose to be. And I guess this is a doodle because the lines are scratchy. Would be nice if you added some shading and highlights so she would pop out more. But still, this is a nice start. Just experiment and practice. 3/5
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 03/07/2010
  • She doesn't look like she's daydreaming... looks more like she's nervous or shyly smiling at someone. If you want to try making her look like she's daydreaming, have the girl's eyes looking up towards "the sky", looking dazed. It would be even better if you pose her with a surface (like a table) and have her elbows on it, her hands pushing on her face, and her eyes looking at one direction. That is what I can "say" to make her look like she's daydreaming.
  • happitaffi - 03/05/2010
  • hmmm..... is critizism welcome? (it will be constructive, yes.)
    well see it just looks like shes smiling, or nervous, thats what i think when I see her hands behind her back......I used to do that alot since i didn't know how to draw hands. razz instead, try to make use of what you CAN do.and if you want to put something in the drawing that you can't do, go ahead! it gives you practice. don't just try to do something with what you can do and try to make it work, because it won't. an
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