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- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 03/22/2010 |
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- Title: Sara Strong
- Artist: Spiffthemighty
- Description: The last drawing for a while. Sara Strong is the master of the strong nuclear force which binds protons and neutrons together. Her sword can only be wielded by her and has the ability to emit high energy neutrons to split atoms. Again like the rest, this is a reference drawing so feel free to give advice.
- Date: 03/22/2010
- Tags: sara strong
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Comments (4 Comments)
- snowball_38 - 03/26/2010
- I'm no art critique pro but I say there really isnt much wrong with it. im satisfied anyways haha 5/5
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- deeds_13 - 03/23/2010
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Chest and shoulders: her breast look flat and too high, almost like pecs. They should be around the mid upper arm.
Colouring: You should probably add highlights and low lights. I'd select a different colour of brown for her though. This brown looks really bland but if you added some nice highlights and lowlights I might too pretty nice.
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- deeds_13 - 03/23/2010
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Physically:
Arms- The upper arms are two different lengths. Her left upper arms is shorter then the right. If you want her arms to be bent like you'll have to think of staggering the shoulders. Which would give the sword weight, right know she looks like she's holding a feather light sword.
Hands: They look a tad awkward,I can't give much advice on these seeing as I'm still working on hands my self.
Feet: I feel like she's standing on her tippy toes.
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- PVT Tsuki-chan - 03/23/2010
- I would say, as advice, that it would help to put a bit of shine in the hair and work on the skirt a bit. Right now, the skirt looks flat, not flowing.. Possibly because everything at the bottom of the skirt starts in the same spot. Also, I would say that the breasts are a bit too high for the size that you made them (or too large for the height you made them). 4/5
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