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  • Second attempt? Fail?
  • Title: Second attempt? Fail?
  • Artist: Shade13 Fyre
  • Description: Second attempt, the first attempt was a complete failure and didn't do a good job in the ranking. Hopefully I will get better comments on this one and maybe some advice. it is a little hard to see and has some missing detail, it was all done completely in pencil no other items used (except for paper).
  • Date: 04/19/2010
  • Tags: second attempt
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Comments (6 Comments)
  • Shade13 Fyre - 04/26/2010
  • It took ten minutes and I used an old camera since my printer doesn't work anymore. also this was a practice for the real thing so it wouldn't do much to put shading and coloring on a practice drawing. the purpose of this drawing was to see what needs to be included. Example: "... and the dude's legs are waaaaaay too short. so I guess work on proportions too." I find that appropriate advice.
  • Mazey Podge - 04/24/2010
  • I don't believe you, this probably took you more time than 10 minutes, you only say ten minutes because that's what the quality looks like, and what some one might estimate. -_- Come on man, be honest. And yes, put more detail. Shading, coloring, outline in ink...do something. and work on the focus...blurry doesn't help you at all.
  • Artistic Joy - 04/24/2010
  • I think you should take more time and put more concentration into your work..Also try to clear up the picture a bit more it looks very messy.
  • Slava-Zone - 04/19/2010
  • eh... it's really blurry which makes it look like crap...sorry, it's true...
    if you want a higher rating, at least shade it or add color or something. and make sure it looks good on the screen too!
    i needs... more. It's too cliche... and the dude's legs are waaaaaay too short. so I guess work on proportions too.
    I hope I helped a little...
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