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  • Dragon Jean
  • Title: Dragon Jean
  • Artist: Electrofying
  • Description: Something i did for a friend.

    If it dosn't look pg-13 to you let me know :/
    i'll take it off :/
  • Date: 09/29/2010
  • Tags: dragon jean
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 10/01/2010
  • -continued-
    The shades don't really pop out much. Make the shading darker in the areas you put shade so the girl can pop out more. I think you should also add more depth into the hair by adding darker shades so the hair doesn't look too flat. Overall, I think this is a decent piece. Just a few problems here and there. Keep up the good work. 3/5
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 10/01/2010
  • I would have to agree Tuksunen... well when she mentioned about the body, anyway. The head might be too large for the body. I would suggest shrinking the head just a bit. Another problem I have with this is that her waist is too thin (such as anorexic thin). Widen the waist so it doesn't look like she's a toothpick. I think the whole body is disproportion in some ways (in my opinion anyway), but I guess it's your style. One last thing I think the shading needs to be improved.
  • Tuksunen - 09/29/2010
  • Believe me, I've seen far worse than this! And by that, i mean way, way more revealing & p0rny stuff. :1 So no worries. What I am a bit worried about is that the body -gorgeous as it is- doesn't quite mach the overly chibi head :U Just my opinion, but hey, if it's your style, then 's all good. Overall i really like it (:
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