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  • chibi me
  • Title: chibi me
  • Artist: kisa kitty12
  • Description: ya this is my chibi i made this one on paint also so dont be to mean about the art thx kisa
  • Date: 09/29/2010
  • Tags: chibi
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Comments (6 Comments)
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 10/01/2010
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    So you have a lot of work to do if you desire to change this in any way. I hope I was not too harsh to you. Please do not get me wrong, this is not bad at all and I am not trying to be mean. I just want you to improve and make your art more interesting. I hope these tips help for this piece and in your future pieces. 2/5
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 10/01/2010
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    If you want to make it more interesting, make some of the circles bigger and smaller and make sure it fits the whole page and maybe fill in the circles with a dark color. The text at the side of the girl (not the text on the shirt) completly ruins it (besides the flat girl). Get rid of the text; have your work express your idea without the use of words (a famous saying that can be compaired to this idea is "show, not tell" wink .
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 10/01/2010
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    down. The shoulders look stubby, maybe spread it out more. There are some proportions that need to be present in a human, regardless if it is a chibi or not. You should look up the human anatomy for help on anatomy (or maybe just kid approperate anatomy sheets). Lastly, the background. I don't know what you were going for, but making random circles and scribbles doesn't make a more interesting background when they're all cluttered together.
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 10/01/2010
  • This picture is... kind of boring and confusing. First, we have a flat drawing of a girl that lacks contrast. The colors are all... flat, nothing really pops at me or looks interesting. I think you should put some shading and highlights into this piece to make the girl pop out more. Now I am not saying just find two other colors to substitute as a shade and highlight I would like to see that you have a whole scale for the shades and highlights. The anatomy... looks disproportional from the neck
 
 
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