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  • My First Attempt
  • Title: My First Attempt
  • Artist: BrynnPanda
  • Description: This is my first attempt at Avi Art. I used one of my avatar's outfits instead of someone else's (I don't like people getting mad). I would like feedback so I can finish it.
  • Date: 08/17/2011
  • Tags: first attempt avatar
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Comments (2 Comments)
  • BrynnPanda - 08/19/2011
  • Thank you for the feedback. I really needed the advice. I'll keep those tips in mind. I tend to draw a little crooked because I'm left-handed and tilt the paper.
  • Aeronn - 08/19/2011
  • It looks good! The lines are smooth, and it'll probably be easy to color if that's your plan. Two suggestions: 1. photograph in really bright light (daylight) so the picture is better, and 2. make sure you step back and compare different parts of the picture. (like, how is the angle of her goggles, compared to the angle of the star on her back)
 
 
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