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  • Title: Silvia
  • Artist: 0Shawn0
  • Description: Um... form what I remember she's related in the story with Saito. Feed back in comments down there pwease? :3 (and yes I know there is two different painted techniques *facepalm*)
  • Date: 12/22/2011
  • Tags: silvia blue dress casual
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Comments (6 Comments)
  • 0Shawn0 - 12/26/2011
  • >_> last part sounded kinda' weird but I can now see clearly watcha' mean! That's helpful! Thank you! C:
  • GianellaBaby - 12/26/2011
  • Okay, if you wanted me to be more specific, very well. One example is her shoulders are too rounded and her neck to wide (and a little long) for a female. Another thing, her arms are too short for her body. The elbow should be ab out mid-body so remember that. Maybe you should try drawing a person without the clothes so you could see the body and how it could be fixed.
  • 0Shawn0 - 12/23/2011
  • aye, I just want it a little more helpful, I was very grumpy from other stuff yesterday and apoligise for being a little too angsty about it. v.v
  • 0Shawn0 - 12/22/2011
  • Oh I see, I understand now! I'll get it right next time! ;D
    (grumpy waiting for feed back and getting VERY vague criticism that doesn't really help at ALL or get to any point of which needs improvement...)
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