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  • Trying to improve
  • Title: Trying to improve
  • Artist: 00EEE000
  • Description: So this was a pic I drew to celebrate my pageviews and faves on deviantart,
    It's kinda a selfportrait but very idealistic,
    Please do not use without my permission
    Please check out the fullview version: http://cherrii-yunie.deviantart.com/art/15k-views-5k-faves-269895179
  • Date: 03/16/2012
  • Tags: selfportrait semirealism anime realism
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Comments (4 Comments)
  • Sila Calien - 03/22/2012
  • The texture is amazing and the anatomy is very good! I think you could use some more shadow, mainly on the hair on the right side directly next to the head and on the bottom on the right elbow. Also the upper arm (left) should be slightly wider than the lower arm (right now its the other way around). I'm still amazed by the texture though, this is simply beautiful!
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 03/21/2012
  • For example, I think the hair would stick out more if you added one two more dark shades. It doesn't have to be super dark; it should be dark enough that you can see more depth. These are just suggestions, mind you, and if you don't want to use them you don't have to. I just giving them to you so you can improve on it and perhaps your other pieces as well? I checked your dA account and you have amazing work. Keep it up!
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 03/21/2012
  • Wow, this is awesome! Lovely job on the coloring and the pose is adorable too. I just want to let you know to be careful on the proportions. The biggest problem with the picture... if I take the length of the right arm and measure it with the left... it's longer than it should be. I think the area where her body bends needs a little more work, but I think it's because I can't see the clothing's creases too well. I think what would help this piece out a lot is adding darker shades.
 
 
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