- Title: happy birthday!
- Artist: moo1117
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Description:
comments are appreciated :P
this was for my japanese teacher xD - Date: 05/14/2012
- Tags: happy birthday
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- Phantom-of_Winter - 05/17/2012
- I find this lovely! I love your technique in coloring; it feels like some sort of fairy tale setting. But what ruined it... is the text. It just takes up that whole space and its way too powerful that it ruins the focus of the girl (which I feel you wanted the main focus to be on). I think you should have written at one of corners in a small font (I think cursive would work best). 4/5 Hope your teacher likes this.
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