- by xXx Haruka Akiyama xXx |
- Photography
- | Submitted on 06/26/2009 |
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- Title: Parks ditch(maybe)practice one
- Artist: xXx Haruka Akiyama xXx
- Description: i took this cuz my friend was teachin me about angeles in photography i know its not good but please rate and comment(be as harsh as posible) i rilly wanna know how i do and what i need 2 do to improve and it was cell phone camera
- Date: 06/26/2009
- Tags: parks ditch think thts
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Bleed Gasoline - 06/29/2009
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well you wanted feedback on compition so here goes:
i see what you are going for with the angle and that is good . I personnaly would have tried to either pull back and get more of the tree or zoom in and get less, My vote goes to less. the trucks in the background add a distracting element so try to leave them out. finally your horizon is about mid way up the photo. your horizon line should be at either 1/3 ir 2/3 the way up. oh yea and get a real camera cel phones only do so good - Report As Spam
- HORNY CRAYON - 06/27/2009
- ehh it ok :]
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- xXx Haruka Akiyama xXx - 06/26/2009
- read description
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- xXx Haruka Akiyama xXx - 06/26/2009
- plz comment n rate
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