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  • Title: the horizon
  • Artist: vampire_gunner_yuna2492
  • Description: let me know what u think. i want comments its a poem about the horizon and the person in it shows the same emotion as the poem.
  • Date: 08/18/2010
  • Tags: horizon
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Comments (1 Comments)
  • Kittiefish - 08/31/2010
  • I like it, I just think maybe you have too much going on. Sometimes, simpler is better. You might also want to correct spelling.
    Other than that...I get the emotion you were trying to get through. Good job. 4/5.
 
 
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