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Darkness, a shadow, falls over me.
My judgment has already been cast.
Eyes clouded to the point where I can't see.
Thinking things out is always left for last.
Indigo fire points out the way.
Hard to tell what's really right and wrong.
I should never be allowed to stay.
I don't know if I can be here that long.
Purified light, reconstructs my withered soul.
Show me how worldly lifetimes are spent,
clean up this life that's been smeared in coal.
Maybe my mind can be put up for rent.
Forever bound to the reaches of space.
Soon to vanish, without even a trace.
- Title: Shadow Soul
- Artist: HCTotorro
- Description: I wrote this poem a few years back when I used to be all doom and gloom status. I used to think the absolute worst about everything. Especially during the holidays.
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: shadow soul
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Comments (7 Comments)
- XoX_Dreamless_XoX - 09/09/2010
- It is...THIS IS THE PERFECT POEM I WAS LOOKING FOR!!! You have a great taste of writing poems.5/5. smile
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- Greenblue 23 - 06/16/2010
- it is gloomy. but i like it.
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- iBeSupahNinja - 05/13/2010
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This is a perfect poem. heart
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- evilangel121234 - 03/31/2010
- amazing poem... if its not too much can u read mines and let me know if im any good?
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- iiChui - 02/01/2010
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i like your poem
very much!
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- Swinkeling - 01/06/2010
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I like your poem a lot!
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- Ciel_Juniper - 11/01/2009
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Its very good. Did you mean it be in the form of a shakespearean sonnet??
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