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My tears were hidden in the snow
I hid from those around me
My wall feel free
As I cowered I lost
Losing secrets, losing memories oh so dear to me
I’d been unable to say it
As I stood silent the revelation tore at my soul
As I wondered why you came
You took advantage of my weakness and killed my dreams
As I tried so hard to hide
My pain, the nights I spent up all night
Thinking of you
When you ripped up my heart, I loved you still
The pain I felt slowly faded
As I smiled at the memories
That last day came, I’d had enough
I turned and walked away
It was my one escape, I the refugee
It’s that time of year
I’m back at that place
Where we used to date
It’s the holiday season
When you’re happy and sad
That special time, when your emotions run free
If you read this, I hope that you know
I’ve moved on, just like the snow
It’s a never ending cycle, a winter show
- by downcast drizzle |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Winter Heartache
- Artist: downcast drizzle
- Description: I've gone through a lot lately so I wrote this. I felt it was holiday related as they often stir memories of the past and heartache is often reminsced during the holiday period.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: winter heartache
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Comments (6 Comments)
- bluehinata96 - 12/15/2008
- sugoi! its awesome =D
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- downcast drizzle - 12/15/2008
- Thank you Auntie!!! I'm glad you like it!!!!!!!! ^_^ I wish more people would rate and comment!! Tell your friends to vote! (not icky 1/5 votes though!)
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- I Eat Chu Crack - 12/15/2008
- Good luck Mei! i luv this poem! =D
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- downcast drizzle - 12/15/2008
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Yay!!! Comments!!! Thank you so so much!!!!
Teehee~
(omg that's like my thing now!) - Report As Spam
- Radioactive K T - 12/15/2008
- I love it Taylor! I can understand how you felt in the poem. I am currently working on a poetry project but I dont have to write my own poems for exmples. I am going to add this as my favorite. I love all the emotion you used in it! I'll give other the link too!
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- SuperSayain Prince vegeta - 12/15/2008
- Awesome
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