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Darkness, a shadow, falls over me.
My judgment has already been cast.
Eyes clouded to the point where I can't see.
Thinking things out is always left for last.
Indigo fire points out the way.
Hard to tell what's really right and wrong.
I should never be allowed to stay.
I don't know if I can be here that long.
Purified light, reconstructs my withered soul.
Show me how worldly lifetimes are spent,
clean up this life that's been smeared in coal.
Maybe my mind can be put up for rent.
Forever bound to the reaches of space.
Soon to vanish, without even a trace.
- Title: Shadow Soul
- Artist: HCTotorro
- Description: I wrote this poem a few years back when I used to be all doom and gloom status. I used to think the absolute worst about everything. Especially during the holidays.
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: shadow soul
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Utsukushii_21 - 05/16/2009
- nice
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- Vertango - 05/16/2009
- Bleh
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- haertstrings - 05/16/2009
- DARKNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- toshiro sai - 04/27/2009
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i love this poem its is like you but a lot of your feelings into it
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- Koilinen - 04/14/2009
- It's well made, it shows up your feelings and the symbols are interesting. But I think that this is already heard for few hundred times (Maybe I'm too picky since only the completely different ones hit me). And it reminds me about superheros like Batman. O.o
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- -evil-panda14- - 04/11/2009
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i luv it do i hav 2 scream it or just feel it i luv it
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- -evil-panda14- - 04/11/2009
- I LUV IT its so dark and mysterious witch i bet you are *.*
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