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I want to see you every day,
through the despair of the heart.
I live through the pain of everyday life,
hoping that I'm never alone.
I can see through the lies of others,
who just want to protect themselves.
Here I am,
living, breathing proof.
Here I go,
trying to show the truth.
Here I lay,
so cold and alone.
The hate in the world,
wearing and tearing at the heart.
Though hate is the least of my worries,
I can live with people hating me.
No, hate is good to me, love is the one thing,
the only thing that tears me apart.
Here I am,
living, breathing proof.
Here I go,
trying to show the truth.
Here I lay,
so cold and alone.
I'm in love with you,
but I guess thats not enough.
I guess I've never been good enough,
hence why my heart is shattering.
Of course what should it matter to you?
you have it all, looks, personality, and talent... what more could you need?
Here I am,
living, breathing proof.
Here I go,
trying to show the truth.
Here I lay,
so cold and alone.
Now I must say,
forever goodbye .
Now I must go,
never to return.
But before I'm gone, you should know,
I'll always care, even though you don't.
Here I am,
living, breathing proof.
Here I go,
trying to show the truth.
Here I lay,
so cold and alone.
- by SkitzTasticTashie |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Cold and Alone
- Artist: SkitzTasticTashie
- Description: This is my latest lyric/poem, I wrote it to my most recent ex-boyfriend.... Thats really all of my explanation so please just enjoy and be nice with the comments... and I'd love random messages ^.^
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: feelings heart
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Legendary Pirate Plasma - 07/14/2009
- I enjoyed a lot of it, but I think that the chorus was used way too often. In a song of 4 non-chorus stanzas, the chorus should only really be used 2-3 times max, otherwise it looks like you're trying to use chorus to fill in the length of it. But it's still well written other than that, so I'll give you a 4.
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- kyonkyonlvrbaby - 06/19/2009
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it is very good! :3 and i totally know how that is.
...but it's not very...wintery? - Report As Spam
- I x I - M i d n i g h t - 04/26/2009
- That is so touching...
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- xxImortal_Memoriesxx - 01/31/2009
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NICE
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