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Darkness falls without a sound,
And falling snow drifts on down.
I stare outside wishing please,
For you to put my heart as ease.
It's been so long since you've been here,
But I'm still wishing you were near.
I hope and hope that you'll come back,
And save me from a heart attack.
But I know you won't return to me,
The snow says so... can't you see?
The ice cold chill soothes me so,
Yet when I touch, it melts real slow.
The way our love used to be,
Flawless, but then, it began to flee.
I find the sting, the chill, the pain,
Brings me back to being sane.
The snows tell me to move right on,
And that a brand new day will dawn.
A day where I no longer love,
The way we used to push and shove.
A day where my heart will find solace,
And of you in my mind there will be no trace.
I will be happy, I will not cry,
I'll be me as time goes by.
So says the snow, my knew found friend,
I just must simply say the end.
The end of what was me and you,
Of the love that was never true.
I sigh and gently close my eyes,
And wait for time to go by.
It feels like hours, days, and more,
So I turn my music up a score.
Let it Snow...
Let it Snow...
Let it Snow...
- by x__DarkBlue |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: Let it Snow
- Artist: x__DarkBlue
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Description:
The winter holidays is a time for joy and celebration.
But this isn't always the case.
There is just as much sorrow and despair...
But is there still hope? - Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: snow sorrow sadness holiday heartbreak
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Comments (7 Comments)
- sneep snop - 12/17/2008
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Amazing Job!
Totally loved it!! <333
Kudos to you ^^ - Report As Spam
- [~ Kabita Chiizu ~] - 12/16/2008
- This is really good!
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- Implie - 12/16/2008
- awesome. it's so good that I can't think of anything else to say <33
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- Director Fanmar - 12/16/2008
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Very beautifull, I liked it a lot :3
I would like to see more from you ^^ - Report As Spam
- Usa x Chu - 12/15/2008
- Magnificent. Really touching to someone heart who has experienced this. 3nodding
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- Jen In Wonderland - 12/15/2008
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It's beautiful! biggrin
My poems are like 'I met this guy name bob. He had no jog..." blah blah blah.
:3 - Report As Spam
- sgjjkdrrgdjsgdjgh - 12/15/2008
- Wow. This was really good. I liked it. biggrin
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