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Darkness, a shadow, falls over me.
My judgment has already been cast.
Eyes clouded to the point where I can't see.
Thinking things out is always left for last.
Indigo fire points out the way.
Hard to tell what's really right and wrong.
I should never be allowed to stay.
I don't know if I can be here that long.
Purified light, reconstructs my withered soul.
Show me how worldly lifetimes are spent,
clean up this life that's been smeared in coal.
Maybe my mind can be put up for rent.
Forever bound to the reaches of space.
Soon to vanish, without even a trace.
- Title: Shadow Soul
- Artist: HCTotorro
- Description: I wrote this poem a few years back when I used to be all doom and gloom status. I used to think the absolute worst about everything. Especially during the holidays.
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: shadow soul
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ayumi_Cherry - 12/16/2008
- It doesnt have to be holiday oriented, mines not razz
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- Ayumi_Cherry - 12/16/2008
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Woah, this is good & very deep. i like it alot =]
plz rate mine too, its called life, lost, 2hearts1destiny.
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- Kurama34 - 12/16/2008
- very nice, i love it. can you comment mine please to see if you like mine.
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- Forsaken Neko - 12/15/2008
- Sorry, but this has to be holiday oriented >_<
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- Bloodstained Fingerprints - 12/15/2008
- This explains myself a lot. 5/5.
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- half-d3mon - 12/15/2008
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oh my, this is something! o.O ... I have nice challengers ^.^
I really liked this one. - Report As Spam