- Santa was riding his one horse open sled he landed on the roof he tripped and he shouted and he also pouted a kid came out. When and heard Santa shout the kid said" you are shouting and pouting what about the song loser!" santa felt shamed but what he figured out his name was on the naughty list.
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- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: jolly santa and his problems
- Artist: 561kiba561
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this is a poem about Santa and his problems
gaia rocks! - Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: jolly santa
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- Petite Usagi - 07/19/2010
- The form is not very good and it kinda looks like a normal paragraph in a story
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- rap_god - 07/09/2010
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it was ok not the best i have sean it was horrable
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- Echo Ligeia - 04/10/2010
- Haha, good. I wish the structure, grammar, and spelling was of a little better quality so it could give your poem more credit.
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- jerrodsgirl2009 - 03/22/2009
- thats .... stupid. lol
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- del blaine - 02/07/2009
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woooooh
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