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warm chill in the morning for new years day
i stay tossing and turning trying to start of my day
i hear laugh and yelling from the room closed by my door
unknowing what will happen ,not caring at all
this is what i call a holiday disaster from down under!
i still feel the chills that crawl up my spin the night that i had to say goodbye
the driver was drunk and my friend unaware that his last holiday will be takin in the end
the streets were on fire the night was wet with oil
our head filled with cheer
we were both so excited to end the new year
but as we said goodbye
cars collides and his life flashed before his eyes
glass flys past his flying body
tears role down his cheek
his blood stoped pumpin and his heart stoped its beat
he was suppose to be heading to my house but instead
was man in suit with a hat on his head.
he looked at me and his head fell low
i knew what had happened and he said no more
my holiday disaster from down under will always be remembered as the night that i lost my best of best friends!
- by vampires lost love |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: holiday disaster frm downunder
- Artist: vampires lost love
- Description: this is about a life lost before the new years
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: holiday disaster downunder
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Comments (5 Comments)
- tokio_hotel_37 - 01/23/2010
- this is so sweet 5/5 i loved it i mean that you would think of them always!
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- The Infamous Tacoman - 01/02/2010
- Its an obvious rule of christmas that if your going to create a christmas poem you need to ryhme!
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- Yumeh Foxy - 07/26/2009
- Needs to be spelled right and needs more effort 2/5
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- CamCamIsOnFire - 07/12/2009
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ITS LIK A STORY NOT A POEM
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- kittman11 - 01/02/2009
- needs more effort! 4/5
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