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Through the misty snow-covered woods
I travelled far and wide
I admired the crystal covered Dogwoods
The way the ice sparkled and shined
I soon arrived at a little old house
Stars were twinkling in the sky
I tip-toed past, quiet as a mouse
And decided to pass it by
As I was walking alone, thinking quietly
I heard a voice behind me
I turned around and smiled brightly
And said, "Merry Christmas, Mommy."
But there was nobody there when I turned around
For once I just wish I could hear that sound
- by Bathory Erzsebet |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/04/2008 |
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- Title: Lonely Christmas
- Artist: Bathory Erzsebet
- Description: I have no idea where I was going with this. I decided I wanted to write a sonnet. I don't ever write poetry, so it's pretty bad. I just kind of started it and it went from there. I guess it's kind of about a girl that's alone on Christmas. She thinks she hears the sound of her mother's voice, but it turns out to be her imagination. O.o Yeah. It's bad. I kind of had fun writing it though.
- Date: 12/04/2008
- Tags: lonely christmas
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Maddyll - 12/30/2008
- I thought it was pretty good. It's way better than some people could do!
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- Bathory Erzsebet - 12/29/2008
- Well actually it was her imagination, she thought she heard her mom's voice. I guess it's a little unclear, but I tried. xD Thank you. <3
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- yummieskittles - 12/28/2008
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that's nice. i'll give you a 4/5 cuz that last 2 lines didn't make any sense. she did hear the sound right? so i think it should say that she wants to hear it again..
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- Bathory Erzsebet - 12/08/2008
- Thank you for the comment.
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- darmanitan limbo - 12/07/2008
- >.< so saddening.
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