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My heart, my soul, ever so cold.
Drifts alone along in a frozen hold.
Ever since that fateful day.
When you decided to run away.
As you faded away from my sight.
The snow took flight.
Falling gracefully and free.
I wish that was me.
Silver ballerinas swayed in the breeze.
They did as they pleased.
Every crystal tear began to rain.
All I could feel was pain.
So this last message I give to you.
Is to watch out so your heart doesn't
feel this way to.
- by Yuki_Ginn_Koori |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: Frozen Hold
- Artist: Yuki_Ginn_Koori
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Description:
This poem I wrote when I saw the Carrie underwood video "so small".
This poem is about a cheating boyfriend who leaves his girlfriend for
the other woman. As he leaves and it starts snowing.
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: frozen hold
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Yuki_Ginn_Koori - 01/02/2010
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Thanx you I wrote this like forever along...
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- Little Milkflower - 10/01/2009
- beautiful, wonderful, exhilarating, theres not enough words to decribe this poem 5/5 at the least! i say 10000000/10000000 is more like it!!!!!!
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- Faithatar - 08/15/2009
- beautiful
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- tekker king - 06/19/2009
- it has feeling its a great poem
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- nagamitsu gensou - 06/17/2009
- thats so sad i feel sorrow
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- Li Read - 05/14/2009
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I like the poem
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- Coldhearted-x - 02/24/2009
- reminded me of me
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