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christmas time
is a time to bring cheer
christmas time
is a time to be near
a time to laugh
a time to exchange
a time for thought
a time for thank yous
christmas time
is a gracious time
christmas time
is a happy time
with presents
and games
parties and cake
it is a happy time
IT'S CHRISTMAS TIME
- by vampiress_of_the_dark |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: Christmas time
- Artist: vampiress_of_the_dark
- Description: it's time for christmas
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: christmas time
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ZoZoGoneCrazy - 08/19/2010
- umm well i think it is good but if was going to be great you need to read it again and put commas in, so that people remember to take a breath
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- julie196 - 07/02/2009
- Wow... when you're in Florida, you don't wanna read about Christmas... lol
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- Z_LION_KING_BEAST_Z - 04/26/2009
- READY FOR CRISTMAS
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- xxxemo-princess666xxx - 02/03/2009
- i critique alot. ur not using commas, no caps at all, change "thank yous" to just thanks, use better vocab....dont just say happy, say exhilerating or w/e suits u, but happy is so plain n in poetry u need to use words carefully since u only hav a few lines to send ur message to people, so u want to use words that wil envoke their sences and make them remeber ur poem....
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- Prince Noir - 01/14/2009
- I like it
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- xxkatie_in_th3_mom3ntomxx - 12/11/2008
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one question where,s the evil and bad side of it all
for example SANTAS A STALKER
AND HE HAS MIDGITS AS HIS SLAVES
DAM IT what i mean is CHRISTMAS NEEDS TO BE MORE DARK AND DEPRESSING lol kidding just kill anyone who is fat and bounces on the ground like luke pumpa and amee - Report As Spam
- nanott - 12/06/2008
- Wooh! Really good xD
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