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Ohh christmas tree so green mrgreen ,
I spin around you without your wealth 3nodding ,
I think of you as my true best friend,
My darling honey with no shame in me,
We dance and dance until dawn,
The snow bells ring and I think of poorness,
How most people don't have homes,
And if to think if I shall fall apon you my honest christmas tree.
My family cares about me,
And I really cherish that,
I hold it tight forever,
Presants, cookies, and milk can fill me with with joy,
but I will never deny you my special christmas tree.
- by rukiagrl78 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: Christmas Tree :heart:
- Artist: rukiagrl78
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Description:
This poem is about a young 12 year old girl, who is waking up in the middle of the night, and thinks about all her family and friends, and all the best moments in her life. She sings about her feelings in front of her christmas tree.
She is picturing her and her tree, dancing in a castle.
If you think this a good poem I thank you for your pleasant. - Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: christmas trees friends family poem
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Comments (5 Comments)
- sk8erboi33 - 11/10/2009
- 4/5 or maybe 3/5
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- Vintage Creator - 06/09/2009
- good
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- puppyluver7889 - 04/06/2009
- its aright but need more detail no affence 3/5
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- T0xic Reflecti0n - 12/28/2008
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nope ...
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- rukiagrl78 - 12/06/2008
- I think I did pretty well do you?
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