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Once there was a Christmas Angel
for everyone she was a stranger.
Anything bad she saw,
was totally out of law.
Once she was a Halloween Devil,
she had the evilest level.
But then she found out who was Santa,
she became kind and moved to Malta
- by Elusive Dione |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/11/2008 |
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- Title: Christmas Angel
- Artist: Elusive Dione
- Description: This is about the Christmas Angel who flies around houses to bring joy and happiness in families. Then the Santa will know who he wouldn't get good-big gifts.
- Date: 12/11/2008
- Tags: christmas angel winter
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Elusive Dione - 03/05/2010
- well SORRY! Some people just AREN'T ment to write poems. You have NO idea how I worked on it. If you have bad comments, keep them to yourself, constructice critisiscm isn't probably needed, since I'll never write poems again...
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- I glycerine I - 11/13/2009
- nice poem
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- gO_kiLl_yoUrseLFXoxO - 10/03/2009
- Isn't poetry supposed to MEAN something? You put no feeling behind it. You have an excuse to pour your heart out and say everything you've always wanted to and you write that. Wow. 1/5
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- SashaFurdacion - 03/01/2009
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Only half of it rhymed.
I assume you tired to make the whole thing rhyme?
I didn't like it much. There wasn't any meaning behind it.
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- Olivia Anderson - 02/12/2009
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sorry boring
strange, really
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