- cold and wet like a blanket covering the earth so sweet and so soft till ur cheak turns rose cold how dose snow works no one can realy no because snow is just a preasnt from the heavens ubove snow
- by XxDemonic_lover99212xX |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/11/2008 |
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- Title: snow
- Artist: XxDemonic_lover99212xX
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- Date: 12/11/2008
- Tags: snow
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- Legendary Pirate Plasma - 07/14/2009
- It's not a bad poem to be sure, but my main problem with this piece is the lack of attention to spelling and grammar. If that was fixed, I would like it even more so than I do now.
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- XxDemonic_lover99212xX - 01/12/2009
- thx ^_^
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- Mattm3h - 01/01/2009
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good job
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- dark fierce link - 12/14/2008
- Nice Poem I heart You
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