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On Christmas day and eve
it's a 'nice' time to weave(but I don't)
I watch as my realetives speak
as one of the ornamentes on my very small tree tweak.
I walked shyly over there
only to hear a sound of a tear.
My baby cousin Tina
a ballerina,
ripped her skirt
now all she have is an un-designated shirt.
For the meal we have garlic bread
along with my cousin's injured head(WE DIDN'T EAT IT!)
which was bumped
on to a stump.
When we had the baked goose
everyone in my family who had agrues had a troops.
After the long and the boring meal,
I saw a light of teal.
I went out of my bed
to see what lies ahead.
I opened the wooden door
and looked at the cold hard floor.
I gasped at what I saw
WAS SANTA CLAUS!
He gave me a wink
and he was gone in a blink!
When I walked over to the Christmas ornaments
I felt their designments.
When I felt the star,
what I thought what happened next was bizzar.
It talked and told me to let it go!
I did what it said so.
And there they go...
The next morning I was astonished
to see a non-blemished tree.
The ornaments that were free came back.
That's when I saw reindeer tracks...
My cousins opening there recived presents
that were very pleasent.
The rest of the day was just fine
but I had a great time
with my starry watch caused
by the moon and stars
and also Santa Claus.
This was truly a wondeful
Christmas eve and day...
- by Kizume-Chan |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/11/2008 |
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- Title: Christmas eve and day
- Artist: Kizume-Chan
- Description: Christmas Eve and Day is a very wonderful day.
- Date: 12/11/2008
- Tags: christmasdayandeve christmaseve christmasday
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Comments (7 Comments)
- schoolstdygirl - 02/01/2010
- Liked how you had a rhyming scheme. The poem was kind of confusing though.
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- FireLordOzai11 - 12/19/2009
- Great AND HUGE! WEll done, from JAPAN...5/5
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- Majin Bou - 07/20/2009
- Great Poem
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- Luminene - 04/08/2009
- That was nice!You need to um...work on spelling.(thank god you didnt eat your cousin!)
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- hilatooo - 03/14/2009
- great poem!!
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- sarcastickid - 03/12/2009
- hahaha
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- narutouzimaki329 - 01/24/2009
- wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow man thats nice belive it
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