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you are my rose by the sea
beconing to see harmony
leaving behind no ones soul
showing your beauty to one and all
left alone for way too long
but finally someone came along
to lift you from the withering ground
and hold you like no one else would
to show you a world no one else could
to love and care for, like you deserve and should
thus the being of a heart felt rose.
- by Xector Rengard |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Warm Winter Rose
- Artist: Xector Rengard
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Description:
Its a poem that i wrote for a special someone :D.
it is about a "rose" thats all alone in the world at first and no one notices its pain or how lonely it is but they look at it and do nothing to help it. then a person tries to save it by taken it with him/her. - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: warm winter rose
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Comments (6 Comments)
- naryel - 11/10/2009
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Everything rhymes and your poem is great!!!
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- lowiiT - 06/01/2009
- wow... you fit in the exact words perfectly...nice
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- Asain Mac 07 - 05/07/2009
- wowz amazingg dude,5/5
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- lovable1221 - 04/23/2009
- nice
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- dawn till dawn - 02/01/2009
- Everything ryhmes thats good and great. That the whole thing in a poem.
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- Guard13007 - 12/21/2008
- Great poem!
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