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Dancing in the snow
white falls on white
your perfect dancing figure
makes everything alright.
Flaxen locks go waving past
Your smile lights the way
These bells ringing in my ears
Are from more than just a sleigh.
You're an angel mixed within the snow,
with feathers made of steam
And you make me feel better than myself,
You're my perfection
I am your flaw
You're the most impressive thing
Of anything at all.
- by Le Petit Lion |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: My Perfection
- Artist: Le Petit Lion
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Description:
This poem wasn't specifically written for Gaia.It was actually an English assignment.
My teacher didn't like fact it's form the point of view of a male. She said it "limited my understanding of the character". So, if it's a Man reviewing this poem, I apologize if I failed to completely "understand" the way your fellows' minds work.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: perfection
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Ag3nt0FchaoS - 04/15/2009
- not bad. i like it.
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- sandeonXD - 01/26/2009
- i dont read things cows write... lol jk it was good!
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