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The crescent glows, not as rich as the rays of day,
But throwing a cloak over secrets.
Though it’s not full, you can still view
The faint circle completing the backwards “C,”
If you look for a while, you might notice
The craters. Splotches of gray on silver silk.
The rustling of the leaves in trees
Are the only sign of life.
Except for the occasional hooting owl or chirping crickets.
The sparkling stars don’t notice people slipping
Into the shadows. They could commit a series of atrocious deeds
Spreading like a virus. The moon would not pry.
The sun’s eyes observe everything, but the moon isn’t as nosy.
Its eyes wander off
Into the distance.
- by The Azure Quincy |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Lunar
- Artist: The Azure Quincy
- Description: The moon can become a symbol for the secrets of humanity that are carried out at "night." It makes everything distorted, just like the lies of humanity. When the moon is out, humans think that they're not as noticeable, therefore, they do things that they wouldn't when others are watching. The poem is basically about the mask of everyone's inner secrets and deeds that they don't want to reveal to the world.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: lunar moon secrets imagery symbolism
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Echo Ligeia - 04/01/2010
- I appreciated your demonstration of the nature of humans as secretive and inherently flawed. Using the moon as a metaphor for this was very appropriate, and it is a symbol that has stood the test of time. You have good taste.
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- Echo Ligeia - 04/01/2010
- I appreciate your demonstration of humans' nature to be secretive and flawed. The moon metaphor was very appropriate, and one that has stood the test of time. Good work.
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- Legendary Pirate Plasma - 07/14/2009
- I enjoyed it. The usage of metaphor is done tastefully. I give you a 4 only because it's a little on the short side. Keep up the good work, but just make it a little longer next time for a full 5!
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- springchikun_is_BACK - 01/26/2009
- Very well done! Good job!
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- Cryptic Wisdom - 12/24/2008
- very beautifle i give you 4 stars.
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- Herelen2 - 12/12/2008
- Nicely written. I can agree with you easily.
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