- by queen_of_night8 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: LIes
- Artist: queen_of_night8
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Description:
I know we will never be togather
and you far like star
you my wish, you my dream
i keep saying these thing to get far from me from my mind ,my heart ,and my soul
BUt its all lies
coz you are what i want
thats all i know - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: lies
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sklink - 04/08/2010
- crazy
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- mashumari v1 - 11/16/2009
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Eww...Bad grammar, seems cliche, and it's in the description...
1/5 ^_^ - Report As Spam
- queen_of_night8 - 06/24/2009
- thnax i ll work on grammer
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- apriltheangel13 - 06/23/2009
- u are a great writer
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- lucylyn911 - 04/20/2009
- i think u did very well u just need 2 work on ur grammar and...keep writing ur very good
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- Lucky Lass 38 - 01/01/2009
- Is this perhaps a Gain who is from another country and does not speak English well?
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- Keito Kashiwa - 12/26/2008
- dun dun dun....epic fail...you put the poem in the discription.
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