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Confusion. Swirling, whiling thoughts.
Never sure. Different from one day to the next
Yet oddly similar somehow.
I just want to which way is up and which is down.
Confused, frustrated, confusted.
Spiralling maze of thought never
far from the truth yet never able to reach it.
Annoying, unnerving, maddening.
Never knowing what your thinking.
Maybe you think it’s appealing?
But you don’t do you.
It’s just you.
Confusing
Frustrating
Annoying
Just me.
- Title: Speak plainly
- Artist: Damdiea
- Description: i poem i wrote today in study!
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: speak plainly
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- DLneostarG - 12/26/2009
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http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/non-fiction/vote/?entry_id=101898257#title
can u check this one, type this to the URL bar and Vote: - Report As Spam
- Black Skitz - 12/30/2008
- not bad... i kinda like it ^^ 4/5
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- Damdiea - 12/23/2008
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to me it is holiday oriented cause its a time where i spent lots of him ethinking about the past and this is a piece if my past.
and i neve notice the way i write poems they just seem to form themselves in the way. - Report As Spam
- H i P P O-C R I T E S - 12/22/2008
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I don't know if you did it on purpose, but I like the way the poem's shaped. The way the words get narrower and narrower, like the mind closing off.
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- scruple - 12/16/2008
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Not holiday oriented though
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