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the vipers kiss is a deadly vampire.
when the kiss strikes ur hearts heart beat stops.
the vipers kiss is a deadly weapon to all man kind.
beware the vipers rare kiss in order to live...........women feel this as rejection.
though vampires die with the sight of the sun vipers kiss can survive the son...
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all u can hear when strike by the viper`s kiss all u hear is your heartbeat.............
- by cockatoo223 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: viper`s kiss
- Artist: cockatoo223
- Description: fuulllll of describing
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: vipers kiss
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- -Cynical Sexy Bear- - 12/19/2008
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Sorry....typo...
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- -Cynical Sexy Bear- - 12/19/2008
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*ahem* When you sybmit poetry you should probably use real words and actually completely type out the word,"You." It's fairly simple, actually. Spellcheck. Learn it, love it. And smilied make your tone seem less professional. I would suggest breaking the habit. If you can't express emotion without little pixels that "explode" then you need to learn to write.
Practice, dear. It makes the world go 'round.
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