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Doing the deed
Before you have greed
Succeeding before you fail,
Getting things done
While there is still sun
Making your mark on the trail.
Don’t you wait
Nor procrastinate
Do what’s right on the spot,
Don’t waste your time
Betting your dime
And surely you won’t be forgot.
Do not have fright
In making it right
Things take time to do,
And do not have haste
For then you will waste
The journey that gets you through.
- Title: Succeeding before you Fail
- Artist: la cliche
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Description:
This was actually something that I wrote for an English assignment :)
Just some Advice. :P
Enjoy? - Date: 12/12/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- la cliche - 06/27/2009
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Yeah,
I know, my word choice has improved since I wrote this though. haha
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- Hero_Linkrc - 05/29/2009
- I think it has real potential, it hits great advice but the word play is kinda, I don't know, flat. But I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. 5/5
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- lariomaster5 - 03/12/2009
- good good but ive seen beter 4/5
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