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A cold blanket, a blanket of snow, how it falls and covers the land.
It makes kids eager to play and get all wet
But moms sometimes say no, you'll get sick
Here comes Santa in his sled, with Rudolph and all
He drops off all the gifts and wishes all the children a good night
- by Lord xyzyx |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: A blanket of snow
- Artist: Lord xyzyx
- Description: Please enjoy, I worked very hard
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: blanket snow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- cheyenne145 - 03/02/2010
- i like it
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- Rico Giordano - 08/08/2009
- that poem was extremely boring and shot in random areas. keep your poetry on one simple topic and extend on thoughts
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- iDealCards - 07/27/2009
- Guys,Poems don't need to rhyme or be long. Short poems are cool.
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- Xxkorn_chaserxX - 07/11/2009
- in reality i don't think that chrismas poems are worth the hassle but love poems are worth a soul, worth the time, woth the effert, and worth reading...
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- tr4cy09 - 07/09/2009
- not bad hmm it's to short
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- Osskan - 01/01/2009
- bad doesnt very rym
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- hotcherry78 - 12/23/2008
- cool poem but kinda too short...........
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