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My heart has fallen for him
Falling down to an endless space
A place deep down where light is dim
When I see him my heart begins to race
I see her when she walks by
Her friends and her so popular
I love her but it's all a lie
I know I'd never be good enough for her
I love him, it wouldn't work out
I love her, I don't have a chance
I love him, my heart wants to shout
I love her, when our eyes glance
My body grows numb
When I see his beautiful face
When I look at him
He'll look back with such grace
It's like listening to a song
When I hear her speak
She smiles when I stare
She knows I'm sneaking a peak
I'm just a girl, there's nothing else to say
I'm just a boy, she'll never be mine
I'm just a girl, I might aswell slip away
I'm just a boy, there's no social bind
When I see him all alone
I can't help but smile
I'd say "Hello"
But walking toward him is like walking a mile
This heart can't take much more
My soul begs for her to be in my life
I love her so much I want to cry
But I'll have to give up the fight
I'm sorry boy, I find this hard to believe
I'm sorry girl, I'm never gonna say "Hi"
I'm sorry boy, I'm ready to leave
I'm sorry girl, I'm going to have to say "Good-bye"
- by xXRawr-GirrXx |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Love me Boy; Love me Girl
- Artist: xXRawr-GirrXx
- Description: I know it's not a holiday poem but I just wanted to put it in becuz I think this love poem will do pretty well if enough people see it... So commet and rate please! Constructive Critisism is completely and totally welcome :D Pink=Girl and Blue=Boy
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: love girl pattern
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Gotan01 - 11/15/2009
- Hej I like it realy, the way you got from two points of view, its all right, but there r some breaking points that dont fitt and its a bit to slow! Ill give it a 4!
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- SmurfQueen279 - 03/10/2009
- I like the way you wrote this from both points of view. Good job!
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- Rizel124 - 03/07/2009
- It's adorable I love it!!!
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- Yasho_Okutami - 02/20/2009
- it awsome i love it
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