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walking through the street at night
but im not scared because of the moon light
im lonely out here on my own
but i never show people that im alone
a promise i keep
to a person in my heart
at a frozen lake hopefully to see the the first flacks
this is where we started
before you departed
as i looked out at the beautiful scene in frount of me
i never notice a person behind me
he came up behind me and gave me a hug
at that time i new it was him, the one i loved
he gave me a kiss and i gave in
in that moments kiss
i new i did miss it
the promise was complete.
a kiss under the moonlight where the first snow droplets started to fall and where we first started too.
- by devil danielle |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: night snow promise
- Artist: devil danielle
- Description: my first.something i came up with .hope you like it and tell me what you think .
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: night snow kiss
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Comments (4 Comments)
- oo_VampireGurl_oO - 01/22/2011
- IFC about the misspelled words I love it!!!
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- Joe21368 - 07/13/2009
- ...Well....You spelled flakes and front wrong. You never capitalized anything and I didn't really like it 3/5 for effort.
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- blackbearhamsters - 01/29/2009
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- devil danielle - 12/17/2008
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sorry its not flacks, its flake. i didnt look back on my spellings.
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