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Your love was like a pill,
I took it to feel better,
But it made me so ill,
Now I'm lying in the dark,
Staring towards the clock,
Hoping for a way out,
Cause I broke your heart,
But you broke our promise,
Now I watch you from a far,
You were drowning in your tears,
And I sat back and watched,
Hoping You'd feel better,
But to afraid to talk,
So lets go for a walk,
I'll just be there and nod,
Waiting for a smile,
And we'll be here awhile,
Until my time sinks down,
I remember your first words,
And you'll know my last,
I'm coughing up my medicine,
But I cant escape our past,
Even if we ever talk again,
This will be our last,
Things sure went by slowly,
As time moved by so fast,
We put our lives on the line,
I might as well drink poison.
- by Heartless Rumor |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Love Sick
- Artist: Heartless Rumor
- Description: I wrote this over two years ago for a girl I dated, We ended up ending our relationship infront of everyone we knew because she broke the promise that she wouldn't lie about something to get to know others better, lies that cast shadows on her personality pushing me away to meet other men and women. So here is what I wrote in return.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: love sick
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Ultra Kinvaras - 12/31/2009
- Even if it's not a holiday poem it still rocks.
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- Kelsey_Got_Swagg - 07/09/2009
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i dont agree with them but Begrieving Snow this is a very good poem thats good you express your feelins in poems
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- Zynd the Lucky - 06/29/2009
- as much as i like it, i gota say, i agree with kittman11.
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- Luminene - 04/16/2009
- Its good that you want to express your feeling.I always do that but i cant seem to say it outloud...(i hate it when peeps call me shy!)
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- FAWN MILK - 04/10/2009
- it's a pretty poem.
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- kittman11 - 01/02/2009
- U FAIL because it not a holiday poem!
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