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Sometime I wonder what snow is,
Perhaps the thing that connects us,
Or maybe the puzzle everyone tries to solve,
All I know is what it means,
And when the flurries of flakes that fly by a window,
They sing a song to us,
Their many shapes forming the lyrics.
A song that touches the heart with warmth,
As we sit by a fire,
The embers liking our frozen cheeks,
Like a dog greeting a long gone master,
And the mugs in our hands we raise to our lips,
And sip the slowly cooling chocolate,
The rug underneath calls to us like a bed.
The snowflakes then cry to us,
Their words muffled at first by the wind,
Then become clear when we strain to hear,
And the song that they sing,
Makes us smile at each other,
Our cheeks rosy and our eyes dancing,
And the blanket of warmth makes us feel at home.
Maybe that is what snow is,
A song that connects us,
A puzzle that we solve,
And the answer when made clear,
Shows us that it is our spirits touching,
Holding our hands together out in the cold,
Making us think that the world is all right after all.
- by rurouni821 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: The Snow that Connects
- Artist: rurouni821
- Description: This is what I think snow is and though I have only seen it a few times, it really makes me feel closer to others. I hope you think so, too, even though the poem isn't all that good. Happy Holidays!
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: snow
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Comments (6 Comments)
- jonas_major - 05/19/2009
- itz cool ill raitz it 100 if i can!!!
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- lady bluej - 02/04/2009
- cool good luck rate mine plz
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- Ninjy - 01/07/2009
- I like what you write. Good luck. :] Comment back? Thanks.
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- sparkle6705 - 01/06/2009
- YEH I KNOW WHAT U MEAN. I LIVE IN CALIFORNIA ND MY GRANDMA LIVES IN GEORGIA SO I CAN BARELY TALK TO HER CAUSE THA TIME CHANGE. ND THAT IS A NICE POEM SNOW IS REALLY A BIG CONNECTOR....
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- rileyzworld - 12/21/2008
- yah awesome and i can relate i live in Florida so no snow but i still know whacha mean i rate a 5
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- truth_is_told - 12/15/2008
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Wow... nice poem! biggrin Yes snow really is a big connector, and puzzle.
The sight brings such joy. - Report As Spam