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The sun slowly sets
On the snowy Christmas Day
You tread through the snow
To find your way
To the family and the friends
That they told you about
You may not remember
But they'll help you out
It's pretty dark now
And it's hard to see
You've been traveling a while
It gets darker and darker
with every mile.
You feel the cold seep through
Your old,tattered clothes
Onyx eyes fade blue
You trip over nothing
For you have no shoes
You lay there in snow
The blizzard rages on
You try to move
But for you...
There is no dawn.
- by Alexis of the leaf |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: The Dawnless Traveler
- Artist: Alexis of the leaf
- Description: A sad christmas poem,a bit oft and unusual,but still a good read.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: snowtraveler death blizzard contestwinner
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Regia-chan - 07/25/2009
- omg it is so good you are good at making poems
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- ksimalwyz - 05/13/2009
- YOU SHOULD WRITE FOR A LIVING! THIS POEM IS AWESOME!
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- go_bold_or_go_home - 04/10/2009
- omg it is so good you are good at making poems ps if you get this be my friend so we can trade and stiff omg it rules why didnt any one comment
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