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The lamps breathe yellow light upon the snow;
Each lacy puff of breath is lost in moonlight.
We’ll go together, cross these frozen wastes,
Eyelashes bristled thick with tapered ice,
And careen into oblivion. Shall passersby
Be shocked to hear our wild yells
That echo in the empty city streets,
Muffled by the hush of silent snowbanks?
Yes, we’ll go together
Past rows of houses, wreathed and locked.
I can hear the drone of fireside conversation
And Christmas carols playing on a distant gramophone,
Like siren-song to weary hearts—
But the promise of nostalgia is built on transient memories,
And crumbles at a touch.
So we travel on—we have no choice—
And make the best of what we’ve clung to,
These old reminders of our shadowed pasts:
Of families long since scattered, or broken from the outset,
Of winter nights spent yearning for a better year to come.
We’ll go together, not brooding on what’s past,
But striking forward in our old toboggan
That carves a spattered path down icy roads,
To destinations undiscovered.
And in this deathly cold, this reverential silence
Our faces glow with life;
Our voices cleave the air.
- Title: A Toboggan for Two
- Artist: Psl_Rpm
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Description:
The holidays are a traditionally contemplative, nostalgic time of year, but this poem describes someone whose nostalgia is a disguise for an unhappy past. The familiar winter scenery evokes memories and feelings that are still a part of her, but she knows that she must (with the support of the one who stands by her) take the second chance that the coming year offers.
I hope you enjoy it! - Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: love nostalgia startingover past winter
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Comments (7 Comments)
- lilbopbop - 05/22/2010
- its great
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- iiDex Mob-City - 03/26/2010
- its cool yo and tight
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- karenjustin - 07/16/2009
- That's pretty nice. poetry is a good way to express your self.
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- xuay - 04/23/2009
- good
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- givans - 04/10/2009
- You're good, nice work
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- chelsiebelle - 12/31/2008
- Ohh... I love the feeling of nostalgia I got reading this poem... And such lovely imagery and symbolism! 5/5
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- Kirisuka - 12/17/2008
- Deep, deep. I can tell you put some thought into this. 8D
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