- On Chritamas you should feel happy not sad you should love not hate you should alway aperichate what you get even if it is just a little speck you sould give you should not want you should care and not greed Christamas is about love and careing barring not despairing you should give and not want that is what Christamas is about.
- Title: Christmamas love
- Artist: blakiller
- Description: it is the way you sould fell about Christamas and aother people
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: christmamas
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- Will696 - 04/07/2009
- never heard something unreliable to know as poetry
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- princess11004 - 12/28/2008
- im sorry but u sould put more feeling in it sorry but i still like it
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- xxxSilver Moonlightxxx - 12/27/2008
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i don't think there's that much feeling in it.
sorry.
next time u do something like this, make sure Christmas is not spelled
Chritamas or Christamas - Report As Spam
- zircon65 - 12/15/2008
- i'm sorry but i dun think it is very good. you are jest listing a ton o things people should do and there is no rhythm mostly because there is only one period out of the whole story!
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