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The christmas dream,
noone believes or so it seems.
No snowfall unless your country is prone,
unsatisfied children with presents moan.
The one day christmas spectacular,
is worst than watching dracula.
People pushing and shoving in shops,
patiently we wait, for it to stop.
Oh! But there is a christmas dream,
one with happiness and tears of joy stream.
Happy lights in houses and down town,
listening to the cheery carol singers sound.
Friends and family give and recieve,
thanking for gifts unwanted not meaning to decieve.
After this we can rest, because its over once more,
until next year when it creeps back into festive stores.
- by Innocentblackshadow |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: The Christmas Dream?
- Artist: Innocentblackshadow
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Description:
Just something i put together, earlier today... my feelings on christmas. Mainly negative as they are, some are positive. It is a simple poem, where every two lines rhyme.
Christmas does seem like a dream... especially in times of economic crunch... where everyone is losing there jobs... and there are still people pushing infront etc. - Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: christmas dream happiness sadness carol
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Comments (5 Comments)
- robotic p diddy - 10/09/2009
- awsome dude nice work keep it up smile
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- EnigmaticSilhouette - 09/03/2009
- Pretty good...And I have to agree, it seems like every year, Christmas gets harder for Familes to celebrate...And some have to go ripping peoples heads off in stores (or literally run them over) to get 'that perfect gift'....I hate people lol...
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- mai mai 17 - 03/13/2009
- Good poem
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- Ye Jin1234 - 12/31/2008
- wonderful poem!
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- II Kitsune Masaru II - 12/26/2008
- Its very meaningful. Good job!
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