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They're sleeping,
Silently dozing.
Until the morning,
And then they're rising.
The children stretch,
The adults yawn,
The pets wake,
And soon it's a barn.
After the sleeps gone, the children rush to a tree
When they see the presents, they shout with glee.
They tear at the wrapping
And tug at the ribbons
Hard to believe they were napping
Before the day had been given.
The parents would come over to watch all of these messes
But they couldn't be angry
The gifts made happy guesses.
But what is this,
A child looks over to the parents.
"Where is he?"
That child questions.
The mother gives a tight smile.
"He can't come." She answers
After a while.
"But he's still here."
She didn't want to give fear.
"He's still watching." The father adds.
He had a quick ear.
The child was satisfied, too young to understand.
Turning away from the adults and going back to the band.
I continue to grin
Knowing what they were saying.
They were talking of kin
Who had left away in praying.
But I didn't want them to be sad.
This holiday was supposed to be glad.
"Don't think of me, think of them."
I gesture at the children.
No one hears, but my words have to suffice.
Besides, just watching was nice.
The children laugh and they play,
The tension finally gave way.
At that moment, I smile and I say
"Finally, what a happy holiday."
- by warflame001 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: Just Watching was Nice
- Artist: warflame001
- Description: Ever had someone pass away before the holidays? I tried to put myself in their shoes, and write it out in a poem. Hopefully it turned out okay. But what I was really aiming for was the message about being happy for the holidays. For yourself, and for your peers.
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: happyholidays
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xXx_shirou_tukina_xXx - 07/23/2009
- I like the poem!^_^
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- xXx_shirou_tukina_xXx - 07/23/2009
- i like the poem~ ^_^
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- CamCamIsOnFire - 07/12/2009
- i dnt get poetry but kool
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- Yenrex - 01/08/2009
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Me likey
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- scruple - 12/24/2008
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:'D That was beautiful!
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- warflame001 - 12/14/2008
- YES! FIRST AND SECOND!
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- warflame001 - 12/14/2008
- Whoa, this is long. Please enjoy though...
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